Friday, June 12, 2009

Poetry in Motion

I like poetry but I write crap poems so I'm showcasing someone else's poem. I didn't ask permission so let's say anonymous wrote it. Well, here it is.

The winter froze his love for me
The pelting rain that turned to sleet
Sealed his heart - a casket closed
The snow falls down & cruel winds blow

Y’know a real canuck
Well they would shoot the puck (give a fuck?)
Instead of taking flight
When they turn on the streetlights

The winter froze his love for me
I feel the cold on every seat
Beside the fire, I don’t know
A dusky ember from an inferno

The winter froze his love for me
I can’t help that my heart still beats
But his heart turned to tungsten steel
And I can’t help the way he feels

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Where the hell did you find that?

And it was supposed to be a song, only I can't write music. That'll be your job - it'll be the grey duvet's first single!

Heather said...

that was really wicked! Nice job Rach :)
Also Miri you should totally put on some of your poetry- i like it ;)

Heather said...

UPDATE MORE OFTEN.

that is all.